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Taanihalai
Nov 29, 2016

nop it was an os

mon arsh
Nov 28, 2016

new story...its gud....bt pov of arnav??

Londoner
Nov 28, 2016

Sad love story. thank you.

mottimatchstick
Aug 20, 2016

gud one '

ginger
Sep 11, 2015

this is a wonderful story

Noordina
Sep 7, 2015

Lovely story and sad in the same time, I'm feeling sorry for them, both of them is right and also wrong, each one have a point, that's why it's so sad.

Taanihalai
Aug 8, 2015

Manuv...i wish i could.. but sorry it would be kinda difficult but thank you for your comments

Manuv
Aug 7, 2015

lovely concept...can you plz make it as a happy ending..with another part..? thank you

Taanihalai
Aug 7, 2015

Thank you everyone for your comments... i'll surely try to come with the same story from Arnav's POV as another shot

I4arshi
Aug 6, 2015

Awesome dear. Please make it ts with a happy ending

Really
Aug 6, 2015

Bravo you equated women to a piece of property and not a real human being with feeling and the ability to make their own decisions. Any time arnavs had sex in a story he's forgiven or it seen as a good thing since he has experience. Way to set an example.

Mit0905
Aug 6, 2015

Hope you write other parts form Arnav POV....

Mit0905
Aug 6, 2015

So Heart touching OS....

Sravya_Luckyrshi
Aug 6, 2015

Wow...That's quite a diplomatic end! I don't want to comment on either of ArShi but must say both did wrong. You did write the turmoil of Khushi really good. Good work!

Arshifanshaf
Aug 6, 2015

very heart wrenching but extremely true nothing is perfect. the word perfect is just an illusion n it s dangerous superb OS thank you

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