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Jun 12

Loved it...

Oct 12, 2017

Wow mind blowing os.... loved it veey much... thank u soo much.. ..... keep writing.. i just looovvveeee them.....

Oct 11, 2017

Beautiful os

Oct 11, 2017

Great ending, Khushi realised that Arnav was for her. His love was true. Thankyou for the story.

Jun 18, 2017

How could Khushi wait for Samrat the Rat ?. Any Arnav's love won Khushi's heart and all's well that ends well.

Jun 18, 2017

for his lovely nature and the love he showed towards the child instead of accepting him only when she knew about samrat. but anyways arnav forgave her and showered her with love and happiness and they lived happily ever after. Sorry, if i have been to rough with my opinion for this story. thankyou.

Jun 18, 2017

I liked this story but was very sad to read khushi being very rough with arnav and not understanding his love and accepting him in her life. Only after Ratna ma showing the proof of samrat cheating her did she realize and than accepted arnav. That part i din't like much. she should fallen for him