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juliesrinivasan
Jul 19

i just read this story staying up all night. it was a magical journey that i wish i had seen on the screen. take a bow dear it was fantastic!

Candie
May 28

Thanks for the story. I enjoy reading your story. Well done

Mimima1
May 27

Thank you all so much for all the comments...

Prajakta_k
May 26

Beautiful story dr..thank u so much..hope u write an epilogue

Harleen
May 26

Thanks dear. It was beautiful journey. Will eagerly wait for new one.

Lilly rose
May 26

Thank you for this wonderful story. I have been a silent reader here. It's great

Noordina
May 26

Best last part, so enjoyable, looking forward to read your next one, thank you

Sherry76
May 26

Wonderful ending....loved the whole story.....do write more stories

Silent reader from C
May 26

Thank you for the wonderful story, the best story I had read after a long time.

Candie
May 25

Sashi cant believe his Khushi is in love with Arnav. All gave Khushi a good surprize for her birthday

Candie
May 25

Arnav is so in love he cant wait. Sashi cant bel

Londoner
May 24

GreT Update. Thank you.

Noordina
May 24

Arnav's and khushi's impatiens to get married and be together is so adorable and cute, it's a wonder how arnav didn't take her right away to the nearest temple and married her, their families should fix the marriage as soon as possible if they don't want this to happen, looking forward to next part

Noordina
May 23

I absolutely loved it, every word arnav said was so beautiful, but khushi's constant denial and talk about moving on and how they're worlds apart really irritated me, hope that now after she witnessed that he too suffered like her with their separation she'll change her mind and accept his love

Candie
May 23

Arnav finally confess but the level keep him going until he finishes his confession. Khushal has finally got his proof how much they are in love. Now both family needs to talk to sashi. Awesome

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