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arshigeet
Jul 29

Nice update....

Archanasuresh
Jul 28

and hoping to see romance brewing up between arnav and khushi. hope khushi will be able to draw arnav out of the shell he has been living since childhood. arnav and anish are so much similar in many ways...right from their experiences to attitude.

Archanasuresh
Jul 28

wow, how come i never saw this story. read through all the parts in a go and ITS AMAZING. great work dear. i have always loved all of your story. The Winner Takes It All - II is my all time favourite. waiting for more revelations about arnav's past and arnav-anish moments. .

Noordina
Jul 28

Wish you a safe journey and safe return, and to have the best times in your life, you're so lucky to have the opportunity to go, take care and enjoy

Noordina
Jul 28

Why is lavanya persistently coming after arnav?, is it her curiosity?, or is it just her way to rebel against her family's way of life?, is she really different from her family, or is she worse?, can't wait to find out, please continue

Lily30
Jul 28

Loved the update

KK
Jul 28

It has been a very long flashback of Arnav. I will be eagerly waiting for the next update after you return Rani. Have a safe journey.

Londoner
Jul 27

Thank you and best wishes for your pilgrimage.

Raani82
Jul 27

Thank you Lily, Londoner, Avni, Arshigeet, Noordina for sharing your thoughts. Pray for my safe return from my pilgrimage. Thanks for all your support.

Lily30
Jul 27

Loved the update

Raani82
Jul 27

Avni be patient. In a story there will be characters and incidences that form the basis of the story. And when I really get to the main story there will be lots of surprises waiting for you. Till then you have bear with me. Plzzzzzzzz.

Avni
Jul 27

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ tell me how many updates mor of this flashback I want a glimpse of kushi and anish Plzzzzzzzzzzz tell me I can't read this malliks bullshit any more feeling bad for arnav

Lily30
Jul 26

Loved the update

Noordina
Jul 26

As much as arnav tries to stay away from that family, someone or something keeps pulling him back in, and now it's lavanya, wonder what will happen next, please continue

Londoner
Jul 26

Thank you for the update.

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