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Juliesrinivasan
Jan 19

I loved it and I guess I would like an epilogue as well. But still it's a great story

Candie
Jan 18

Nice story. Arnav is so right she always got what she wanted.

Lily30
Jan 18

Loved the ending

Nourhan Khattab
Jan 18

It is a nice story but u ended it abruptly....please write an epilogue after few years

Arshi95twilight
Jan 18

Thank you for the beautiful story

Nupur
Jan 18

Nice ending

Shah10
Jan 18

Nice updatev

n
Jan 18

Nice story. Loved HIYA and AYAN scenes with arnav

Suvvi
Jan 18

Loved the story..

Londoner
Jan 18

Thank you . Love the story.

Khushichaudhari
Jan 18

Very nice ending

Mirna
Dec 22

omg i read the whole story in one go... loved it..especially the children, Hiya and Ayaan, great going....

lazydoll
Dec 15

hahahhaa weirdest proposal ever indeed..and our cute little Hiya, she is a mixture of both her parents.. Nice update. Thank you..

Khushichaudhari
Dec 12

Nice one dear!!

arshigeet
Dec 12

Aunty is a horrible mad witch...

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