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Chamkililaadgoverner
Jan 10

Haaa... A delight to see your first ever shot..

Londoner
Jul 20, 2017

Nice effort for the first attempt.

Candie
Jul 20, 2017

Awesome story. Dadi and Shyam's plan flop.

Mit0905
Mar 7, 2014

beautiful...

Asisk
Oct 11, 2013

nice os dear.....

Lucky_Arshi
Sep 26, 2013

You are right akka.I'm sravs.I'm happy u remembered me.And please if you can write more.Will love to read them.

Rasagna
Sep 26, 2013

Loved it so nice.

Arshi_Fan12
Sep 26, 2013

okay! will wait for your SS or FF.

Mirna
Sep 25, 2013

good try..............keep it up

Mininimi
Sep 25, 2013

UR FIRST ATTEMPT IS NICE

Arshi_Fan12
Sep 25, 2013

That was beautifully written! please write more, maybe if you have time, then please write an FF and if not then an SS.

Sakhi
Sep 25, 2013

ni ce OS...

Sunshine11
Sep 25, 2013

Awesome , If u can make it a FF or SS !!

Lucky_Arshi
Sep 25, 2013

Its beautiful.If im not wrong ur renuk akka right?I have seen you once in Vyshu's telugu post.I really liked it.If u can do write more would love to read them also.About this one to be particular i loved it.And the way u have ended was also nice.

Rriya
Sep 25, 2013

i dont mind if u write story on this

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